Writer’s challenge; week two- analyze.

First of all, I want to apologize for not getting the writer’s challenge up last week. My husband, myself, my three-year-old, and four-month-old all came down with a horrendous chest cold. Seriously, it was like the plague! ;) In fact, nine days later, we’re STILL sick, although we’re starting to recover!

The winner of the ten-dollar gift card is Aimee Duffy! I put everyone’s name in a hat and made my husband pick one, so that it would be completely fair. Thanks to everyone for entering! Now, on to this week’s challenge!

 

Week two- analyze.

The first thing you need to do when you want to write well, is figure out what good writing is, or at least, what good writing means to you. I want you to pick a book that you have ALREADY read and that you fell in love with, but here’s the catch; it also has to be a book that is classified within the genre you write as well. So pick your book (At LEAST one. When I did this step, it was more like four or five.) and re-read it. As you read, make notes. Write a short synopsis of EVERY scene. Write down every major character development. Write down any themes and symbolism you notice. Write down anything that moves you, anything you love, and, conversely, anything you hate. If you hate it, make sure you don’t try to do it in your own book. I know that seems like commonsense, but I can’t tell you how many writers I’ve talked to who said, “Well, so-and-so (insert famous writer here) did it, so I’m doing it too, even though I don’t like it.” If you don’t like it, it probably won’t work for you, no matter how many copies so-and-so sold.

I know that this seems like a lot of work, but I promise you, it’s worth it, especially if you haven’t had a classic education in literature and creative writing. This is the best way to learn how to plot, how to make a character arc, how to weave the different threads of a novel together. You’ll learn the good stuff and the bad; what to do and what not to do. And yes, you really need to write everything down, at least for the first few books you analyze. After that, you’ll start to notice things like plot, character development, theme, pacing, and emotion without having to actively think about it.

When I first started writing, I wanted to write romance. The first book I ever analyzed was Jewels of the Sun by Nora Roberts. It was an education. I’m not sure I could have ever written a novel without doing this exercise. I’m willing to bet it will help you, too!

Feel free to comment. Let me know how you’re coming in your words-written goals (and yes, you still need to be writing!). Or let me know what book you’re going to analyze. Or let me know how you’re doing with the challenge! I’d love to hear from you! When you comment, if you’d like to be entered into the drawing to receive a critique (from me!) of your ONE PAGE query letter, please mention it. Everyone who asks to be entered in the drawing will be. The winner will be announced at the start of next week’s challenge. Good luck, everyone!

Delay in Writer’s Challenge (or, a sickness in the family).

Hi, everybody. I’m so sorry that I couldn’t get the post up today. My entire family (husband, me, three-year-old, four-month-old, and even my parents!) is super sick with some sort of chest cold. Nobody is sleeping (cough, cough, cough), everybody is running a fever, and everybody is cranky! Well, maybe not my parents. They have their own quiet, restful house. Sounds like paradise, huh?

But don’t  worry. I’m hoping to have the new post up, along with the winner of the gift card, early next week. We’ve all been sick since Monday  so it’s got to get better soon, right?

Thank you everybody for having a little patience! I appreciate it! :)

Amy’s writing challenge- week one.

It’s the official kick-off for my writing challenge today! I’m super excited! I hope you are too! So let’s get started!

Week One- write. This is the only task that will carry over from week to week. For the next 12 weeks, I want you to write.

This might seem super simple, so simple that you might be wondering, “Is she serious?” Well, folks, I’m as serious as 4 feet of snow melting around a house with a leaky basement!

I know you’ve probably heard it said before, but the number one thing that keeps a writer from being published is never finishing a project. Anyone can write. But it takes something special for a writer to actually finish something.

So today, I want you to commit to a writing goal. Make it ambitious but do-able. My goal is to write 5,000 words a week for the next twelve weeks (or until my current WIP is finished!). I know I might not make it every week, but I’m going to give it one heck of a try.

How about you? What’s your goal? Leave a comment below (you can comment until May 15th), stating your goal and you’ll be entered to win a $10 Amazon gift card, generously donated by Karen Cherry. Karen has a wonderful blog that you can check out here. And, you can read about how she just signed with a great agent! I love success stories, don’t you? Karen is a perfect example for this week because if she had never finished her book, she wouldn’t be happily celebrating signing with an agent!

So come on everybody! WRITE! Let’s hear some more success stories!

Reminder: the writer’s challenge starts on Thursday!

Okay, everybody! The official kick-off to the twelve week writer’s challenge is going to be Thursday. Each week we’ll have exercises, challenges etc. People who complete those tasks (either by commenting or participating in blog hops) will be entered to win super-duper prizes ;) So far, we have books, Amazon gift cards, and writing critiques! I’d love more donations if anyone would like to donate! I’m going to re-post all the info below! Hope you all are getting excited!

 

Amy’s twelve-week writer’s challenge

I’ve been seeing a lot of challenges on blogs lately; parenting challenges, marriage challenges, faith challenges, etc. I started thinking about it and wondered, why aren’t there any challenges for writers? So I decided to create one!

My challenge is for writers who feel like they aren’t quite as enthusiastic about writing as they use to be. It’s for writers who want to improve their craft. It’s for writers who want to connect with other writers. It’s for people who want to explore whether or not they really want to commit to writing. I hope you’ll join us!

It’s going to be twelve weeks long with one post and assignment per week. I’d like for us to really build a community around these tasks, with people helping and encouraging each other and sharing their experiences as well. To that extent, if anyone would like to donate prizes that we’d randomly give to people who comment, I’d appreciate it. Nothing encourages a good comment like knowing that you’ll be entered into a drawing because of it! If you’d like to donate a prize, please use my contact form to, well, contact me! ;)

I’m planning the kick-off for the second week in May. If you’d like to officially commit yourself to the challenge,  leave a comment below. And if you want to make sure you receive the tasks, you can always sign up to follow my blog with your email address. That way they’ll be sent directly to your inbox.

I’m super excited about this, and I hope you all are as well! I’m pretty sure I’ve got the 12 topics selected, but if there is something you’d like to be included, you can always leave a comment!

Interview with literary agent Lara Perkins of the Andrea Brown Literary Agency.

Today we are interviewing Lara Perkins of the Andrea Brown Literary Agency. Thank you so much for being here today, Lara!

 

Me: How did you become an agent?

Lara: Not in a very direct way! I was in graduate school studying architecture when I got my first job in publishing as an assistant to the wonderful B.J. Robbins of the B.J. Robbins Literary Agency. Architecture was not what I’d dreamed it would be, and I was so happy to be putting my English degree to use. But I wasn’t sure if publishing or academia would be a better fit for me long term, so I took a detour through academia, studying Victorian Brit Lit and teaching, before finding my home in children’s lit at the Andrea Brown Literary Agency. The incomparable Laura Rennert brought me in as her assistant in 2010, and I’ve been so privileged to work closely with her ever since.

 

Me: What are three things that elicit automatic rejections from you when reading the first 50 pages of a manuscript?

Lara: I like to think that nothing merits an automatic rejection exactly, but there are some tells that a manuscript might not be right for me.

  1. A main character I don’t care about. I don’t have to like the main character, but I do need to find him or her interesting and engaging.
  2. A lack of tension and suspense, regardless of genre. If I don’t feel like I must keep reading beyond page 50 (if I can put the manuscript down at that point and walk away), then it’s usually a pass for me.
  3. An all-over-the-place voice or character arc. If it feels like the voice changes scene-to-scene for no reason, or if it seems like the main character is static or changes in ways that seem out of the author’s control, then it’s likely a pass for me.

 

Me: What are you looking for right now in fiction submissions and not getting? Are there any subjects or genres that are near and dear to your heart? And on the flip side, what are you getting too much of?

Lara: In terms of what I’m looking for and what’s near and dear to my heart, I’m a sucker for a great mystery in any category or genre, and I love a story with twists and turns that take me by surprise. I love unusual stories, with elements I wouldn’t expect to work well together, but which end up working brilliantly because of the author’s execution. I love a twisting, turning, action-driven plot, but ultimately, voice and character are the most important elements for me.

For YA, I would love to find an absolutely devastating or absolutely hilarious, voice-driven contemporary story. I’m also on the hunt for a page-turning psychological mystery, or an unusual science/medical thriller. I love smart and raw YA fiction, with strong characters, and my taste tends to run dark.

For whatever reason, middle grade tongue-in-cheek humor is my personal comedic sweet spot. Sweet-scary, hilarious, middle grade mysteries always slay me. I also love MG in any genre that deals honestly with ending/changing friendships or family shifts.

For picture books, I’m a big fan of quirky, deadpan, wry picture books, as well as sweeter fare. I’d love to find an author/illustrator who uses unexpected materials or textures or takes some narrative risk. I’m also drawn to books that take a small experience of childhood and draw out something beautiful or fun and universal in that experience.

In terms of what I’m getting too much of, I’d say by-the-book paranormal or science fiction for YA, historical fiction that doesn’t make use of the chosen time period (in other words, the story appears to be set in that time period only because that’s when the author was a kid), and picture books where the rhyme has taken over at the expense of story or character arc.

 

Me: What is one thing about you that a writer would be surprised to learn?

Lara: As a kid, I desperately wanted to learn French because I read a lot of British classics and they never translated the French words. I remember the word ennui in particular always showing up and baffling me. This was pre-internet (for me anyway) and my family didn’t have a French-English dictionary, so it was seriously annoying to my eleven-year-old self. I’m not sure studying French, when I have a Czech mom and live in California, was the smartest decision I ever made, but at least I know what ennui means now!

 

Me: Best piece(s) of advice you can give a writer we haven’t talked about yet?

Lara: Read widely in your category and support other writers. By supporting other writers, you’ll pick up valuable tips on how to handle book signings and social media that will be very useful to you down the road, and you’ll make the kinds of connections that will be valuable throughout your career. It’s also just good karma!

 

Me: Are you open to submissions? If so, how should a writer go about submitting?

Lara: Yes, definitely. I’m actively building my list. Our submission guidelines are posted on the ABLA website here: http://www.andreabrownlit.com/how-to-submit.php.

 

Amy’s 12-week writer’s challenge.

I’ve been seeing a lot of challenges on blogs lately; parenting challenges, marriage challenges, faith challenges, etc. I started thinking about it and wondered, why aren’t there any challenges for writers? So I decided to create one!

My challenge is for writers who feel like they aren’t quite as enthusiastic about writing as they use to be. It’s for writers who want to improve their craft. It’s for writers who want to connect with other writers. It’s for people who want to explore whether or not they really want to commit to writing. I hope you’ll join us!

It’s going to be twelve weeks long with one post and assignment per week. I’d like for us to really build a community around these tasks, with people helping and encouraging each other and sharing their experiences as well. To that extent, if anyone would like to donate prizes that we’d randomly give to people who comment, I’d appreciate it. Nothing encourages a good comment like knowing that you’ll be entered into a drawing because of it! If you’d like to donate a prize, please use my contact form to, well, contact me! ;)

I’m planning the kick-off for the second week in May. If you’d like to officially commit yourself to the challenge,  leave a comment below. And if you want to make sure you receive the tasks, you can always sign up to follow my blog with your email address. That way they’ll be sent directly to your inbox.

I’m super excited about this, and I hope you all are as well! I’m pretty sure I’ve got the 12 topics selected, but if there is something you’d like to be included, you can always leave a comment!

Interview with literary agent Jessica Sinsheimer of the Sarah Jane Freymann Literary Agency.

Today, we’re interviewing literary agent Jessica Sinsheimer of the Sarah Jane Freymann Literary Agency. Thank you so much for being here, Jessica!

 

Me: How did you become an agent?

Jessica: It was actually completely by accident. My college roommate had an internship with a very large, corporate, powerful agency–the sort of office that reminds one of Mad Men, but without the cool retro clothes. Anyway, she finished the internship and recommended me as her replacement. The same roommate got another internship at a medium-sized publishing company (they do very serious books but, at meetings, sometimes shoot rubber bands at each other), and then gave that to me. After that, I was hired by a tiny, radical magazine on the Upper West Side that, with (what should be frightening) regularity, received death threats. (Everyone there is fine, to the best of my knowledge.) When I graduated, I was hired as an assistant at my current company and, soon, Sarah Jane–the most supportive, lovely boss on the planet–started encouraging me to take on my own projects. I was initially terrified–What if I ruin an author’s life? I kept thinking–but, then, I fell so hard for a book–Falling Under by Gwen Hayes–now in seven countries!–that I just wasn’t scared anymore.

 

Me: What are three things that elicit automatic rejections from you when reading the first 50

pages of a manuscript?

Jessica: 1. I’ve been thinking a lot about the ratio of dialogue to narration, and I’ve come to the conclusion that more than 1:3 (lines of dialogue to lines of narration) in the first few pages almost never works for me. It can be done well, of course–but that’s rare. I’m also a fan of what I call the “voiceover opener,” like in the beginning of a movie–something that gives a sense of the theme or tone of the book, versus throwing us right into a scene that may or may not ground us in the story. This shouldn’t go on for more than a few paragraphs, though.

2. I’ve seen so many very specific, niche books open with scenes that are incredibly generic (an alarm going off and the character getting ready for work, for example–I get at least one of those a day). It’s important to me that, somewhere in your first scene–ideally in your first page and first paragraph–I get a sense of the tone of the book. If your first scene could work for any other book in your genre (with names changed), then think about specificity.

3. I know agents often say to start with action–and it’s true; I don’t want to spend the first thirty pages watching nothing happen–but too much action without enough description can be problematic, too. It’s hard to care about characters (especially characters in a really high stakes situation) if I have no idea who they are. I received a first chapter from a writer who is very talented–but we were thrust into a hostage situation by sentence two, and I had no idea who the characters were. If you’re going to take me to the edge emotionally, at least give me a character I feel familiar with as a guide. I don’t want to go there alone.

 

Me: What are you looking for right now in fiction submissions and not getting? Are there any subjects or genres that are near and dear to your heart? And on the flip side, what are you getting too much of?

Jessica: I’m always happy to see fiction with active, powerful female protagonists–especially if they’re unconventional. I tend to like works for women that stretch genres–women’s fiction with a surreal bent, highbrow sentences with lowbrow content, thrillers in beautiful locations, protagonists with both brave and kind sides to them. I like scandal, mystery, intrigue, and scheming.

I don’t judge by genre, but by quality–so know that it’s possible I could like anything.

I’d love real world YA with an unusual bent (check out David Isersen’s Firecracker, which is amazing, or Getting Revenge on Lauren Wood by Eileen Cook–also fantastic). I like protagonists with secrets, who get revenge (but are justified), who are mischievous and great at reading the people around them.

In terms of nonfiction, I love pretty much anything to do with food, and I’m surprised by how few parenting books we’ve received recently. I’d also love more travel, memoir, technology, politics, psychology, and pretty much any nonfiction with a strong narrative element.

 

Me: What is one thing about you that a writer would be surprised to learn?

Jessica: I get these weird little hobby/obsessions for about three weeks. Right now, I’m really interested in rock climbing (indoors, of course!), careening around Central Park on rented bikes (poor Sarah Jane has heard me talk about the unlimited bike rental program so many times), and the idea of what the NY Times calls “Hipsturbia”–walkable, green suburbs connected to commuter train lines. I’m a huge fan of the TED Radio Hour (their “Do We Need Humans?” podcast on how robots can mimic human microexpressions and stir our empathy is really darn amazing: http://blog.ted.com/2013/03/15/ted-radio-hour-asks-do-we-need-humans/). I’m thinking a lot about creating some sort of podcast station (Publishing Happy Hour?) and spend far too much time thinking about how to redecorate my apartment. I lust after ceiling medallions.

 

Me: Best piece(s) of advice you can give a writer we haven’t talked about yet?

Jessica: Do your research. I receive so many queries from people who don’t know who I am (love it when they call me “Dear Sirs” since, of course, I’m neither male nor plural) that it’s always a nice surprise when people know something about the agency. I know some agents think it’s a waste of valuable query space, but I don’t see how one “Dear ________, I see that you also like ___________” line can really hurt. In most cases, it helps. A huge percentage of our rejections go out because the author clearly doesn’t know who we are, or what a query should be, or the fact that we don’t represent screenplays without a book attached.

 

Me: Are you open to submissions? If so, how should a writer go about submitting?

Jessica: Of course! Please send query and the first ten pages (all in the body of the email, query single spaced and pages double spaced, if you can) to Submissions at SarahJaneFreymann dot com.